"How cruel is fate to take a life so young and rip it from this world, even if that life is given to protect another."
The
sun had been baking all day. It was still hot at four in the afternoon but it
was the time when new seedlings were checked. It was important because it was
day three since the transplanting and some of the lettuce and spinach looked
borderline. Today was make or break!
Although
he was the youngest in a pack of 13 Jack Russells, Dogmatix firmly believed in
his right to do everything first. He took pride in his chosen position and the
passion with which he attacked every moment of his life adventure could be
quite contagious, hurrying everyone along.
The
knowledge that all the chores would be done by early evening when the best time
of day started…FOOD…ensured that Dogmatix was insistently first again on that
fateful day.
I
took a short-cut through a patch of weeds; earmarked for clearing the following
day, and had to make a quick sidestep as the ‘pointsman’ in the protection
squad charged past, ready to be the first to identify and eliminate any
threats.
The
snake had managed to stay alive for many years, its almost orange-brown colour,
size as thick as my forearm and length of about a metre, attesting to its
maturity. The definitive markings and not having moved away at our approach
identified it as a Puff Adder!
The
strike, swift as an arrow, struck deep, penetrating the fleshy part above the
eye-bank. Not quite one year old, the short legged, wire-haired Jack Russell
known as ‘Dogmatix’, knew no fear. Shaking off his attacker, he followed
through with an attack of his own…and suffered three more strikes to the head
before the pack descended.
The
riot that followed left behind the tattered and torn body of what had been the
proudly muscled Puff Adder, who had not managed to cheat death this time…but
neither had Dogmatix.
In
living the life of my self-appointed ‘protector’, a role he adopted from the
time he opened his eyes at about 10 days old, Dogmatix had managed to ensure
his place in Paradise by giving his own life in defending and protecting my own
life. The agony I helped ease him through that evening, was denied me by this brave young
animal friend and I waited with him, watching helplessly as he lost his fight
against the snake poison.
I
pay tribute in verse to a friend who deserves it:
You
chose me as your playmate
And your friend
You were magnificent and brave
till the end
And your friend
You were magnificent and brave
till the end
You
supervised the garden work
Watched
and learned about hunting
Practised
on geckoes and lizards
you
even caught a rat and made your first kill
And
in between…PLAY of course!
And
insisting on being and doing everything first.
Thank
you for choosing me
to
be
part
of your life and
for
choosing
to
be part of mine.
This post is part of the contest Ten words to a Story(or Poem).. on WriteUpCafe.com
wonderful narration !
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you kind sir. Much appreciated.
ReplyDeleteAh! You motivated me to take part in the competition. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff JJ - read your entry and enjoyed the style - almost as if you were a reporter on scene...
DeleteThanks Helen. Do go through my other stories also if you find time. It would be great to have your views.
Deletegreat.. enjoyed reading the post..
ReplyDeleteThanks Sayoni, much appreciated
DeleteBeautiful ...and infact Nostalgic for me. When in school. my essays use to be different, only because- i generally adopted the style of Prose followed by Poetry.
ReplyDeleteYour post has an excellent flow. Glad to be here.
Thanks Viyoma,appreciate it.
DeleteSad story of a brave soul. Really, pets are worth to be a part of our lives. Lovely poem at the end. :)
ReplyDeleteAppreciate it, thank you Neha.
DeleteBeautiful Helen.. I loved the way you narrated and the poem in the end.. Wow.. :-)
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Thank you SiS, your words give my words wings.
DeleteEnjoyed the read ,Helen :)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing!
Thanks so much Simran - you too!
ReplyDeleteNicely written especially the poem at the end. :)
ReplyDeleteAll the best!
Kind words always lift my spirits and inspire me to write more - thank you!
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